Topic
If governments of some countries want to attract more people to live in rural areas or villages, what is the best strategy or approach that governments can use? Why?
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The topic of whether to live in urban area or rural area has generated much discussion in recent years. In my opnion, most of the people choose to live in urban area, because of the convenience of tansportation, entertainment, education, medication and so on. To attract people to move to urban area, I suggest the government should develops some functions that can only be provided by the rural area, such as the nutural scene, fresh air, and the quiet enviroment. I understand Kelly that the government should focus on increasing the business opportunity and the convenience of entertainment to attract poeple, but I think it would turn the rural area into a urban area, and lose it originatility and the adavantage of nature.
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Revision
The debate over urban versus rural living has gained prominence. In my view, most people opt for urban areas due to better transportation, entertainment, education, and healthcare. To entice individuals to rural areas, I propose the government emphasize unique rural features, like natural scenery and a peaceful environment.
While I understand Kelly’s emphasis on business opportunities and entertainment convenience, prioritizing these may urbanize rural areas, eroding their originality and nature’s advantages. To strike a balance, the government should promote rural distinctions, such as scenic beauty and tranquility, ensuring a unique appeal without losing its natural charm.
In conclusion, highlighting rural uniqueness is vital for attracting residents, preserving authenticity amid the urban-rural debate.
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